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hi iam Abrahim from edmonton. ilove about animals and zoo. also iloinve anin killer imals in the sea like killer while . in killer move ilove that boy , he help the big poor animals .

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Here are some tips: 1. Brush up on grammar. And spelling.
2. Capitalize.
3. Be more descriptive. All we get from your review is that you like some movie and zoos, but why? Elaborate (big fancy word, I know.)

Do these things, and you'll have rocking reviews in no time!

i love zoos but am upset how some don't treat animals well

i beileve that there needs to be more control over all zoos, we need to stop taking anymore animals from their natural habitat and keep the ones we already have. i mean if it were me i would just let all of them go free, but i do understand that alot of those animals are protected and there sometimes for a purpose.

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